Monday, 26 May 2008

Station 3 poignancy in Leaving

1 comment:

Wild Swimming Heart said...

This sketch is less definitive in after-taste, not as compelling as the previous two. More of a quiet, comfortable narrative only just seen from a distance. The leaving is quite effortless and lacking in import. There is quite a contrast evident between the leaning-in walking and the sudden parting.

On this occasion, some of the contact we were having within the dance near the doors facing away from the camera, would have been good to have caught with another, closer camera angle. I will endeavour to do something about this next time. More cameras gives me more choices of what not to include in my edit, as much as opportunities to combine material.